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Review:Maximum Dusk says:
I just read this story, so this is kind of the review for all chapters... sorry! I know I'm being lazy, but typing up a review for every chapter would take really long, since I love this story so much!

So firstly, I'm really happy that we finally have a story where Victoire isn't the perfect and most loved child, thank merlin! Most stories that I've read has Victoire as the perfect one, and it was starting to get a bit old. This was like a breath of fresh air for me, I've never really liked Victoire all that much in other stories, but I love this one. She's just so real, not like the usual Vick who's just a bit too perfect and unlikeable. I'm not saying that that is always the case, there are still quite a few stories with likeable Victoire's. But I like your version the most because she's so honest with her feelings, and a lot stronger than would be expected (if I was neglected like my mother like that, I'd be a lot more bitter than Victoire, that's for sure. I also love how she's not generic as a part veela, I really like how she isn't the type to enjoy male attention and the like; she's still a human being, she still has problems.

I also like how you're steadily moving at a good pace. You've been able to establish Vick's relationships with her friends and family well, and it's kind of nice to read about a Teddy who isn't instantly in love with her, nor a Vick whose instantly in love with him. I'll enjoy there relationship now, since I'll (hopefully) get to see it grow from the start. So far I'm liking what I'm seeing, so keep up with the good work!

Please update quickly! I can't wait to see how this story will develop.

Author's Response: Hi!

I'm glad you enjoyed this story.

Yes, I definitely was trying to make sure that Victoire was an original characterization. All the things you mentioned were pretty intentional, or what I was hoping the reader would get, in terms of lack of cliche, etc.

I don't know when I'll have time to update, but I will try to think about doing so, since there are people who really seem to enjoy this story.

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