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Review:Anonymous says:
Hey doll, anonymous here:d

I love you style, it was...fascinating? I don't know...the way you wrote this ensured I couldn't walk away mid chapter, even if I wanted to.

I think the flow was really, really well and the way you phrased your sentences were strong, and flowy(?)if that makes any sense!

I was so surprised with Ronald's little stunt there, but I wasn't surprised by his...proposal, I suppose.

I don't know how he could justify that...maybe he thought Hermione wasn't one for grandness? I don't know, but I hope to find out!

xoxo

Anonymous

Author's Response: Hey :) Thank you for the review!

I'm glad you like my style and I hoped you wouldnt have wanted to run away mid chapter! This story is sort of my baby at the moment and I really love writing it!

I liked that you liked the way I phrased my sentences! I find that sometimes they end up awkwardly phrased so I'm glad you liked it.

Ron makes me laugh. He's not a bad character but just a little bit oblivious! Hes sweet! I'm glad you liked it!


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