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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Hey there!
Apologies for taking forever to give the review. A series of events popped up here and there, and things (as always) got out of control. :P

Any who, I am truly annoyed at Fiona at the very start. Like Albus, I very much wanted to bang my head into a wall so hard. I mean, if you're family was being threatened why would you even ask questions like that? I don't mean to say she's stupid, but she's really stubborn. Also, she needs to know that Hogwarts is the safest place ever built on this planet, so she can stop worrying about that. ;)

I'm so relieved that Susan was alive, I mean you dedicated three chapters for her, then you're going to kill her?! So yeah, I was really happy *fist pump* when she was alive. I was like doing all sorts of crazy dancing in my head.

The ambulance/car-chase scene was fantastic! It was so cool! I've only been in an ambulance once, and though I know that they are only used for a misfortune of events...I still want to drive one. They always go past my house, and the drivers just go against the flow of the traffic without a care. Omg. So cool. ( A bit off topic )

Anywho, another great chapter and I can see that there's a lot of progress going on, good job! :D

Ta-ta,
CloakAuror9 xx

Author's Response: Hello, again! Please do not fret. We all have many things in life that take precedence, which is why chapter 28 only made it into the queue on Friday night. ;-)

I'm glad that you felt a bit annoyed with Fiona. At the same time, Hugo was all out of sorts and probably didn't do a very good job of conveying to her just how much danger they were in. The biggest thing that I was trying to get across, aside from the fact that Rose and Octavia are now stuck in Britain, is that the "perfect" relationship between Hugo and his wife that makes Rose feel so insecure is not in fact perfect.

I do believe that Susan will be just fine in the end, but nothing is set in stone, unfortunately. The ambulance chase has been part of the story since the very earliest drafts and I was really excited to finally get to write it. This also made it kind of stressful, since I'd built it up so much in my head. At any rate, I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. And I do hope that you don't have many opportunities in your life to ride in an ambulance, no matter how cool it might seem. ;-)

Thanks so much for all of your time and great reviews!

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