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Review:Moonyxluna says:
You've left me utterly speechless. Your writing is so beautiful, I can't even find the right words to put together a proper review.

I really loved the flashback about the age difference, and how Teddy pointed out his parents were even further apart. The bit with his blue eyebrow was cute :)

I love how you write the chemistry between Rose and Teddy.. They are so lovely together. And, (you're going to have to forgive me, because every one of my sentances is going to start out with "I love.." :p ) I loved this- Marriage was one of those sticky topics for a girl whose ex-boyfriend had married one cousin while her current boyfriend had gotten divorced from another cousin-- It was this, and other subtile sarcastic bits that gave this chapter the perfect amount of humor, while still giving a beautiful sense of where Teddy and Rose are at in their life together.

I loved the end of this chapter! Teddy bringing new robes for Rose reminded me of 'winner takes all' with her blue (forgive me, it's been a while, blue, right?) robes. And the bit about them sneaking glances at eachother was very fun to read as well!

Your writing is magnificent. I loved this chapter and the whole of 'winner takes all'. Fantastic work, as always!

Author's Response: I'll admit that I've put off responding to this review because I don't know how - this story left you speechless! It's beautifully written! You like Teddy/Rose! You must be too good to be true. :P

But thank you from the bottom of my heart for loving this story and taking the time to review it. Both of those things mean a lot to me. ^_^

I'm glad that you picked up on that discussion between Teddy and Rose as this story is, in part, a manifesto on the ship, showing how it can work as well as its pitfalls, writing about the two characters beyond the moment of falling in love. To my surprise, I've never found a Teddy/Rose novel - I hope that one exists, just for the sake of it. I'm really glad that you like their chemistry, as my other goal is to have fun writing these two characters together and show everyone else why they make a great couple. It'll be sarcasm and awkwardness abound, but that's what makes it fun for me. XD

(And yes, Rose's robes were blue. These ones, however, I imagine to be light-and-dark green striped.)

Thank you again for reading and reviewing! ^_^

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