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Review:ewsoucf7 says:
My review as promised... I'm hpfan2309 on the forums.

Firstly I would just like to say that your authors note at the end made me laugh...will the it used to belong to the White Star Line.

I thought this was so well written, and so beautiful too. I think you dealt with some very sad issues, but I think you've made it an easy, enjoyable read. I don't know whether I'm sad or happy that they died. I would have liked if they both lived...but sadly I think history shows us that hardly any men survived. I would have felt worse if she lived and he didn' perhaps you came up with the best option. Still, I'm sad.

I did notice one mistake in it, apologies if people have already pointed it out...
"the closest being was a boy of about fifteen, how just sat there silently"
I think it was meant to be who.

That said, it was the only mistake I spotted, and is definitely an easy one to make.

Overall, I think you can tell by the uber long review that I loved it. I am very glad that you decided to write something like this. It definitely was subliminal, especially as it is a difficult topic to write about. Good luck with the challenge (which I have entered too.), I think you'll do well with it. =]

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your uber long review! I will fix the mistake and I'm very glad that you enjoyed it, I had fun writing it! Good luck too with the challenge! Love Livvy xxx

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