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Review:RosieQueen says:
It's Rosie with your requested review! :)

This was a very interesting story! Very well-written, too! Almost no punctuation/grammar/spelling mistakes, which is fabulous.

I have read many Pansy Parkinson stories, all of them with Draco being terrible to her. But this was a unique interpretation, with Neville. Usually it's Pansy/Blaise. Even though Rowling said Neville marries Hannah, the plot still made sense.

The flashbacks were a bit confusing at first, but when I reached the part with Pansy being in the hospital, I understood. So maybe if you could label the beginning of the flashbacks with "flashback" it would be easier to follow? Just a suggestion. :)

Draco and Pansy's characterizations were spot-on. Draco was clearly never in love with Pansy, and I always thought Pansy was a bit obsessed with him, and I think you did a good job with this! :D

All in all, very well-written, with an interesting plot. I liked this!

~Rosie

Author's Response: Hey! Sorry it took a while to respond, I just got internet going! :) I'm really glad that everything was pretty spot on! :) It makes me happy that I can make sense out of an odd pairing. Thank you so much for the read and review!

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