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Review:killinglonely says:
Hello, I'm here with your VERY late review! I am so sorry for the wait! You requested in February and I still haven't responded, but here I am now, and I'll try to say as much as possible to make up for the delay.

There was really only one thing I found weird in Luna's characterization. 'She told him that she knew he loved her and why and to hell with others trying to define them.' To me, it didn't seem like Luna would say that kind of thing out loud. Like, she was so weird, and of course she knew that, but she was so beyond the point of caring that she wouldn't even mention it. Luna is a lot more carefree and airy, so she wouldn't mention something like that. It almost makes it sound like she was purposely stepping outside the box when we know it's just her character, and in the end makes her sound like one of those teenagers that tries hard to be unique.

Now, don't get me wrong, this is an AMAZING story. You really did characterize Luna well, despite my ramble up there. I like when you talked about her hitching up her skirts, that was definitely a Luna thing. And I love how you portrayed her husband, even though we know Luna is weird, we get to see that there's some normal in the relationship (because you know, everyone assumes that together they're a bunch of nutbags so it's nice to see some normalcy). I adored the first paragraph! Very sweet, very charming, this whole thing was very light and cute and I loved it. What I admire the most about this is your ability to say so much in so few words. If you read my fics, I'm always coming up with four thousand word chapters and huge paragraphs that make my readers' eyes hurt. It's amazing that you can give so much in so little.

Anyway, this is definitely going to my favorites.

Author's Response: Thanks for coming by! I'm sorry for my own delay in responding to this review!

On Luna, I'd like to think that after some years she would have matured a bit, the world having gotten to her a little bit but not altered her in anyway. I do see your point on this making her seem like she was acting that way on purpose rather than just because she was that way. I'll see if I'll change anything on that in any future edits.

Thank you fir your compliments on me being able to say so much in few words :) I'm always worrying about word count because I tend to think I don't have enough to say. This tells you how well I do on NaNoWriMo (as in not).

xChar


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