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Review:Maelody says:
A very good chapter indeed! Your detail and inner feelings of Hermione are very good in this chapter! There were a few grammar/spelling mistakes, but nothing one read over shouldn't catch. I really liked the cliff scene and the Ministry break. However, I don't really see it being possible that Hermione would be the head of a department she just moved to when there are many more older people there good for the job. Also, wouldn't Bathilda's things have been looked through by now? It seems like a lot of years to go by before anything is done about her things (especially with how important she is in the wizarding community). Though I can't wait to find out what exactly is going on with that not so seemingly safe box lol. Why is she in Dumbledore's office? (assuming she is brought to the past as she would have called it Mcgonagall's office). Anyway, my absolute favorite part was when you described what everyone did in the ministry, and definitely everything that was going on inside! The imagery was wonderful and the memos even frustrated me! :)

I give this chapter a 10/10!

By the way, due to the high demand on my review thread, I am asking that if you want your future chapters reviewed, you come and re-submit. I love the story so I will definitely continue reading, but I may not get back to it until you have the next several chapters up otherwise. It would be best just to re-submit so you get the reviews you definitely want/need/deserve, and this stays on the top of my priority list. I wouldn't make you do it if I wasn't so swamped with stories right now. Love the story, and I will definitely continue to read when I have the time!

Author's Response: Hey :D Thank you for the review!

I'm glad you think the detail and inner feelings with Hermione were good! She is an extremely hard character to write. I'll have a look over the spelling mistakes.

The point about Hermione being head of department will be explained all in good time throughout this! Although I will say its to do with Kingsley and them being offered high positions within the ministry.

I think Bathilda's things may have been looked at before but it just works well for the story and avoids a lot of the cliche in tiime travel! I'm glad you liked the imagery and the memos really made me laugh!

I'm glad you like this and I will be sure to rerequest!

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