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Review:RosieQueen says:
It's Rosie with your requested review! :)

This was a wonderful, bone-chilling one-shot. The ending was especially unexpected. I'm assuming he died? I love the ending, though. I think it was very creative!

Very well-written. The flow was very good, and the story was easy to understand.

I only noticed one mistake in this sentence: Following the two men, he always stayed a block behind, never loosing sight of the figures. It should be 'losing' not 'loosing.' Not a big deal, just pointing it out.

Overall, this was a very interesting one-shot. Unique with an unexpected twist of the main character dying! Anyway, I loved it! :D

~Rosie

Author's Response: Wow! This was way quicker than expected! Thanks :D

I'm so glad you liked it (and I'll jump on that embarrassing typo ASAP)

I'm so glad that you thought it was 'mysterious' enough. It was defiantly a step outside of my comfort zone, and I was worried that it wouldn't have the right atmosphere.

Thanks so much for this review :D I'll defiantly re-request.
- Adele :)

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