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Review:hausofluucy says:
Hey, here with your third prize review! :)

I liked this a lot! I like how the character's weren't cliched and were more unique than other Hufflepuff's, and I love Caitie's character so far, she's great! :D

There's a few grammatical mistakes in there, for example: "Quite frankly, I wish I weren't actually so skinny sometimes". Weren't should be wasn't, and actually doesn't really sound right in the sentence, but apart from that I don't really see any mistakes. :)

Overall, good chapter and you've developed an interesting character so far! Lucy :)

Author's Response: Hellooo :)

Thank you! That's good that you think that because that's exactly what I was trying to do! :) Yay! Thank you :)

Hmm you're right about that, I'll fix it up next time I edit the chapter, thanks for pointing it out :)

Thank you! :)

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