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Review:starryskies55 says:

AW! THIS WAS SO SWEET! Poor Theodore. I love it when stories embellish on minor characters, and I've got a feeling that I'm going to love this pairing too.

I like Adam- he's very awesome and I like the brotherly (I'm assuming he's in his late twenties- in my head he looks like Ryan Reynolds) concern he had for Theo. Do we get to see more? Also I especially liked the way you portrayed the childlike happiness of Theo when he was reading the books.

Anyway, great start, wonderful writing- it's very fluid and your descriptions are amazing. The way you've characterised Theo is interesting... I'm wondering how much of the character he's going to keep as he grows up.

I loved this line- "Who would ever wear clothes like that? They’d have to be mad. And what’s with the bat on his front?" Superhero clothes are weird. It is a fact. Why does no-one notice that Captain America looks bizarre and what on earth possessed Peter Parker to make a full Lycra suit?

Anyway. Great story! :D

Author's Response: Hey!

I know, poor Theodore! He's so awesome that him being sad makes me sad.

I love Adam, who is so played by Ryan Reynolds! And we do get to see more of him. Chapter 3 or 4 you see him again, I think.

That is a cool line and very true. :D

Next chapter will be up soon, I'll make sure of it. :D


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