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Review:Sarahthebookworm says:
Hi again!

This chapter was great, although I personally think Al's funnier than Chelsea. He's just so crazy and self-centred! It's obvious that they're both beginning to fall for each other, although they try to explain it away for different reasons. I loved that whole scene with Hunter and Emily, she's such an obsessive stalker! She's already talking about rings! And Al and Chelsea bonding over it was cute. I liked Logan in all his over-protective glory. He's in Slytherin? I didn't expect that.
Of course Al thinks he was being nice to Chelsea to make her fall for him, but I'm pretty sure it was a genuine gesture, too.

Anyways, enough of my rambling! Great job, and please update soon!

Sarah

Author's Response: Hello, lovely :D

I personally love Chelsea and Al equally, but I figured everyone would like one more than the other. It seems to be equally split from what I've heard :)

Psht. Al and Chels falling for each other? Never.

Emily's crazy, and yes, Chelsea's twin Logan is in Slytherin. I mentioned that in like... chapter four? Or something? Meh, I wrote it somewhere before. But I'm still glad you were surprised!

Well, we're going in Al's head next, so we'll see what he's thinking then ;)

I love your rambling! Thank you for another lovely review :D


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