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Review:Alopex says:
I made a couple of notes about potential typos as I was reading. At the beginning, I believe that the plural of "bus" is "buses" rather than "busses." Also, I think you left out an apostrophe when Anastasia was talking to Dolohov ("were" instead of "we're").

Again, another intriguing chapter (I keep using that word). Sure, some of the events seem to stretch plausibility slightly, but that is usually the case in adventure-type stories. Characters are usually thrown into improbable situations out of the realm for ordinary people, but it's a rollicking good read. :D

So, we're seeing Moody as a young man! Interesting. You've manufactured an interesting background for him here, not being a "real" Auror. It works for him, though . . . fits his personality, I think. Also, I'm liking this Duncan guy. He's an interesting character as well. I wonder how he and Moody will get along on their secret spy mission? I don't remember ever reading a story before where a Muggle and a wizard had to cooperate so closely for some reason!

Ah, and of course, Tom Riddle is up to no good. He sure doesn't waste any time trying to recruit people, does he? Hmm. Anastasia didn't seem to be particularly enthralled, though, despite her dedication to the Wizarding Soviet mission (or whatever to call it). I don't know for sure, but it seems to me that you are possibly setting her up to be one of those pivotal characters . . . such as, will she go with Riddle or not, and what will be the larger ramifications of that decision.

Author's Response: Thanks for another review, it's great to see you wanted to keep reading!

I think Moody is one of the most intriguing characters in the series, and we know so little about his background that it's kinf of fun to get to make it all up. Duncan was featured in my other long story, which shares a lot more about his background. And he was also shipped with a young Minerva if you can imagine that.

Riddle is definetely up to something, and I'm afraid I can't really elaborate more than that just yet.

Thanks again!

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