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Review:starryskies55 says:
*enter Challenge-master with trumpet fanfare and applause. Lots of it*

Great chapter, and although we don't know much about Timothy yet, he sounds very interesting! (sorry, Moth)

Your narration through Molly (Molly and Moth.. oh dear God :P) is fantastic- she has very witty observations and is certifiably insane :D

That they're both Squibs is a different and very interesting plot and way to go- thumbs up for originality! Your spelling/grammar is pretty good on the whole, and I especially liked the characterisations of the evil trolley-lady and Grewer the elf- they were hilarious, and made a nice contrast with the comparative friendliness of Hogwarts :P

Great story, keep it up! :D

Author's Response: Duh Da Duh Der.. (Bad impression of a trumpet) ;)

Thank you very much :) Hehe - Molly and Moth... it just had to be done! xD Yeah- she's can't exactly be classed as 'normal'.

Thanks so much for reviewing and I hope you like it! The Squib idea was slightly random - but why not give them a shot? :)

Keira :)

P.S. Grewner is fast becoming my favourite house-elf! :P

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