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Review:Maelody says:
Plot line: I first off would love to comment on how it is five years after the battle and they are still boyfriend and girlfriend. I was never one to think they would get married right away, as other stories say they do, so I loved this. Just with this first chapter I can see how adorable this is going to be and I can't wait to continue reading more about it. I didn't get lost at all, even though it is short.


Characterization:
I loved Ron. The food bit fit him wonderfully, and though I think Hermione may have got a little too upset with him about it, it was still very like her. Like in Hogwarts, when she wanted his attention she was mad, and now, with the idea of marriage interesting her and angering her at the same time, I would say she acted on old impulse. I never thought of them getting tattoos, though, but the idea was really good and I loved the small detail.

Spelling and grammar:
Everything actually seemed fine to me. I don't think I caught anything with this read through. :)

General liking of the story:
I really liked this chapter. Your detail is amazing, and the little things, like the shower, tattoos, breakfast, and Ron's facial expressions made it very enjoyable and I loved it. I am eager to start the other chapters! :) 10/10!

Author's Response: Hey :D Thank you for the review.

I much prefer it when they aren't married because it gives more substance to the relationship and I think that Hermione would have wanted to wait a little longer to get married. This story will hopefully be adorable.

Hermione in this story is going to be very dramatic so that's why she got quite upset with him. There's a lot of reasons why things happen at the beginning but I did try not to make Ron out as the bad guy because he's not. He's just a little oblivious!

I'm glad you liked this chapter and all oif the little details


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