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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
Hey Hannah!

This was a fantastic update (and I'm sorry I took so long to come review it). I loved getting to see how Andy had matured and grown-up, how she still looked up to Bella and being able to see her emotions when Bella was leaving, it was really sweet. I love that they exchanged necklaces as a promise, something to tie them together (and again later with Cissy, when Andy ties the blue ribbon in her hair) - it's very reminiscent of the chapter chapter with the daisy chains linking them together. :)

The contrast between the Bella at home and Bellatrix was very nicely done, and it's nice that Andy doesn't feel shafted in anyway by Bellatrix's words or actions; she just knows it's what is expected of her.

I'm really interested to see where you take this story, how these little girls that you write so well turn into the women that we know from the series. I'm especially interested to see how you depict that break in their bond when Andy marries Ted - it seems impossible here for anything to come between their sisterhood ties, but I know you can pull it off.

I'll keep my eye out for your next update! :)

Author's Response: Thank you for coming to review it! :) I'm glad you liked that - it is a bit reminiscent of the first chapter.

I suppose Bellatrix is hardly the only person to change who she is at school versus at home! A need to be something else, I guess :) Andy does understand that.

I'm really excited to get to that part - it's a little daunting (especially because I don't want to have to break them apart!) but hopefully I'll be able to do it. Thank you so much for the review!


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