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Review:Elenia says:
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Wow, so much description and I loved every bit of it. You really managed to make this story come to life with all that, I could so easily picture everything in front of me! Just beautiful.

I really liked your characters, I think you did a good job on both Hermione and Ron. Loved the awkward proposal and the fact that you haven't made Ron the bad guy even though they seem to possibly break up. I always hate when writers do that.

All in all great chapter. Everything flowed and was good in every single way. Can't wait to read more (:

Take care!

~Elenia

Author's Response: Hey :D Thank you for the review!

I'm glad you loved all the description of it! I really did try to make the scene come alive with the descriptions of the senses/

I'm glad you liked the characters I loved writing them both and loved the way that Ron was awkward and he wasn;t the bad guy! I hate stories where he's the bad guy because he's not, not really just a little bit naieve and oblivious!



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