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Review:Siriusly3 says:
This is really sweet, I dread him dying (unless this is an AU where he never dies!!:D) Her thoughts about marriage are a teensy bit far-fetched but understandable what with the war and all. A really great start, can't wait until the next chapter. I think this flowed really well, Katie's character isn't very developed yet but it will obviously come through more later, Fred and George are well played out and I like the glimpse at Fred and Angelina's relationship. All in all a promising start :)

Author's Response: I'm really glad that you liked this chapter! I have her picturing this marriage not only because of the war but also because she has liked him for ages so its not like she just started liking him and is already picturing this. I think most girls will start picturing their wedding even when they aren't with anyone. yeah I hope to have Katie's character more developed in the next chapter and such. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

~Slytherinchica08~


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