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Review:charlottetrips says:
That was unexpectedly beautiful. Unexpected because I think I've only read one other thing by you and it was different from this. I really was taken aback by your descriptions and the way you made Shell Cottage and the surrounding area come alive.

The syrupy sunlight splayed out over the gently foaming, never ending sea, picking out purples and green in the inevitable grey and dancing over each curl, each movement, making the huge expanse of water seem alive. It rippled and reflected off the jet black rocks that lined one side of their cove, and streamed off them as is they were dark, brooding mirrors. Looking out, you could almost taste it, grit and burning salt, saccharine strawberries and honey, like spun gold. - I adored this description of the sea, so different from what I've read before and the sea is just breathing.

Doom's regrets are so clear here and the way we run through her memories shows the parts she hates the most but the parts that she cannot forget. I see why she is at where she is now and the tie-in with her mother's lessons in herbs to the bitterness she feels now was brilliant.

Favoriting!

xChar

Author's Response: Thank you so much! This kind of made my day a little, thanks for favouriting *squeals*

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