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Review:Hogwarts27 says:
Hi, I started reading this story on and off a couple of weeks ago. I rarely find a long fan-fiction story that's well-written enough to appeal to me and hold my interest, but this is one of them. I especially like Trio-centered new adventures that keep fairly close agreement with canon. It was when I got to this chapter and parts of the last chapter that I really got hooked to keep reading as the plot started to develop. I've read the first eight chapters now, and I'm really enjoying the story, with this chapter being my favorite so far. The writing quality is outstanding and on par with what I would expect from a professional writer, and I commend you for the painstaking care you've taken to craft even the fine details. You have a natural talent for writing and the rave reviews you're getting are truly well-deserved.

For as far as I've read, the plot is realistic, logical, and believable, and the characterization pretty good for older, more mature characters. In this chapter, I found the idea of Harry dueling 6 students at once without ever getting hit a bit of a stretch, but it didn't spoil my enjoyment of the scene.

So fabulous work! I look forward to continuing the story, and hope you decide to keep writing long into the future.

Author's Response: Hi, there.

Thanks so much for taking some time to review. I really appreciate it.

Writing the characters close to their canon characterization is really important to me. It's what I've striven for all throughout the story, so I'm glad to see that they seem "right" to you.

As far as Harry being able to duel 6 students at once, I have two thoughts on that. First, he's the Head Auror. He should be the best of the best. Second, the students of this era are not the type of tough, battle-hardened kids who fought in the Battle of Hogwarts. The wizarding world has had almost fifty years of peace and prosperity since Voldemort died. People have become a little soft.

Thanks so much for all of your kind words and thanks for reading and reviewing!

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