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Review:WeepingWillows says:
Hi there!

This story made me feel so bad for Remus and for what he had to have gone through with James and Lily's death. I think that you wrote his emotions very well, and I could definitely feel his nostalgia as he walked through the halls. I liked how you also described how he felt with Sirius' so-called betrayal. It was interesting to see his view of it.

I thought that the flow of the story was very good. I don't think it was over too quickly and I think that you did a good job with transitioning the scenes and describing each scene. I also didn't catch any grammar errors so well done on that!

Overall it was a very good story and I enjoyed reading this and I think you did a good job with describing Remus' experiences and also his emotions!

Well done! :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you think I had Remus' emotions right, that makes me happy.
And I agree, no one really thinks how it all effected Remus, so I wanted to show that. I'm glad you liked it(:

I'm glad you think the flow was good, I was pretty scared tha tI went to straight forward. And fast.

Thank you for saying you liked it(:

~Sarah
Xx



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