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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
Hello with your review on the most up to date chapter of this story :D

Very short chapter in terms of the eons you usually write but nevertheless I think it's one of my favourites! The way you show the pure determination within Ron's mind to make sure that his daughter and granddaughter were safe was enthrawling. I loved how mature you showed him to be with not giving into his urges to go back home but instead uses ruthless methods to get the information out of a man who is really only doing his job. This shows Ron in a different light but it also shows that he loves and cares for his family and that matters more to him than terrorising some poor law enforcer type guy.

Rose is one of the funniest characters being smart and cheeky with her answers but then spotting the good cop bad cop attempt already! She's very clever but also I love her concern as a mother about thinking about her daughter. I really want to know what happened though to Jade, Rose and Octavia because it seemed like a brutal attack reitterated by Ron's message.

I love the way everyone also jumps to Ron's aid even though they are at risk themselves. They all know that they need to find Rose and Octavia and I see the side of Hermione which shows that whilst she wants them all to be safe her mother instincts overpower all reason andlet them go.

It's a nice touch!

Author's Response: Hi, there! Welcome back.

Ron is capable of being utterly ruthless when he needs to be. He is not going to allow the Blood Order to use his family as hostages without a fight. He's going to do whatever is necessary.

Ah, Rose. I love everything about writing her. She is a complete, unrepentant wiseacre, and she is very bright. It's her father and mother coming through. You'll find out what happened to everyone in the Exeter field office very soon...

Poor Hermione. The stress of not being able to help is really starting to get to her. We see a lot more of that in the next chapter.

Thank you so much for sticking with this for so long. I know the chapters are sometimes brutally long, but I like to be thorough. Your reviews really mean a lot!

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