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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
Hey :) Here I am with your requested review

I'm very intrigued by this story because it is so very different to those which I have read before especially because their family is completely rejecting the idea of having a child who is a witch or a wizard and whist they haven't just rejected the place at Hogwarts they have actually rejected the child from their family.

The one thing about this story that sort of doesn't sit right with me is the orphanage just accepting her so readily. Personally in England and in this day and age we don't really have orphanages we have children's homes and there has to be so much paperwork ect for them to even get a place let alone just simply giving them their own room.

But regardless a very promising start and feel free to rerequest!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm trying to show her family as having an almost Pureblooded mindset, except that it's completely the opposite.

I know that the whole orphanage situation was rather AU, which I apologize for. I'm trying to edit the 1st chapter in a way that makes it seem more realistic, but I don't want to drag out the whole process over several chapters. Thank you for the feedback though! I'll try to incorporate that into my editing(:

I'd be expecting a rerequest if I were you(:

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