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Review:Akussa says:
Hi again, couldn't keep myself from reading this chapter as well and I am positively happy to have done so.

You really have a wonderful eye for descriptions and making scenes come to life, you know that? Especially when it comes to characters and the way they act, how they show their emotions and how they look. I loved the interactions between the relatives who wanted to leave but had to stay to see this. Poor Molly, she really picked last in the bowl of luck, did she?

Whestle was great and disgusting and lovely. You really made him come to life and gave him a nice view (andus and rather not so nice mental image, but that is the point; success!) . Will we see him some more or is he simply the train guy? Either way, I think his memory will stay with me !

I can't wait to see how this will turn out but I do have a few qustions. If they are going to be answered in the coming chapters, just tell me so and leave the mystery around!

First, why isn't Molly's mum there to see her off?
Second, 50 students? That seems like quite a lot considering squibs are very rare (according to Ron in Chamber of Secrets that is)? Is it an international school which would explain why there are so many kids...
Third, how old is Molly? I'm guessing around 15-16, am I right?

Ok, I forgot the rest of my questions but they will come back! Loved this chapter as well and I'm just to excited to read the rest to try and remember my thoughts. great, great work!

Author's Response: Hi!

Yes! Haha - thanks for carrying on! :) Huh - I actually thought descriptions were one of my weaker areas! So thank you for saying that! :)

Yeah - Molly isn't what can be classed as 'lucky'. You'll definetly be seeing more of Mr Whestle - I'm still scared from meeting him in RL so I figure you can endure him a little more. ;)

Ooh! Questions! (Sorry - I love questions!)

1) Molly's mum is 'absent'. She 'left' when Molly was eight years old, but I won't say anymore because that will be mentioned later on! :)

2) 50 students. I know that seems a lot! It's not an international school - just squibs from the UK. Some of the number will be the increase in wizarding families actually admitting to having squibs rather than sending them to live in the Muggle world. But the majority of the number is due to a reason which will be revealed in the coming chapters (possible 4 or 5). :)

3) Molly is 16 years old. She's going into her sixth year at Swanleys (well her first, but you get what I mean).

Thanks so much for reading (again) and reviewing (again!).

Keira :)


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