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Review:charlottetrips says:
This was so moving. Sirus wept the tears that James and Lily couldnít cry themselves - what a beautiful line. He's beyond sad for himself, he's more sad for what the Potters aren't going to be able to experience.

This one moment for Sirius to express his feelings in private and have his own good-bye was beautifully done in so few words. There were a few spelling errors but you could see them if you read through carefully. Overall it did not detract.

I liked how you made it so that he felt some mysterious ghosting on his had when he gave the lilies to the Potters. It's an appropriate flower and his continued conversation to them was very sad to read about.

A very nicely done submission I would think!

: Char :

Author's Response: Thank you! I think I was really upset when I wrote it which is why it was so angsty! haha.

It's my headcanon that Sirus went to visit James & Lily's graves before he went after Peter, I mean, he would just have to. *tear*

Thank you!
Jas


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