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Review:Snapdragons says:
:( Why do you write so pretty? ack. This is actually gorgeous and I love it to pieces. The combination of the imagery and second person and the fact that it's Lavender all made this so great.

(And I love the fact that it's Lavender, because poor Lav Lav does get such a bad rep in fanfic which isn't really fair. here's hoping not everybody stays the same as they were when they were 16. :P /rant)

I still am not a giant fan of Lavender, but I think you did an excellent job with her here - you can still see the same Lavender that we know and yet she does seem (rightfully) older and more mature and guh.

Like the day you cut your gleaming gold hair and spun it into straw. Rumpelstiltskin had come a-knocking. He wanted to give your firstborn back... This whole paragraph hnng. It's so subtle, dealing with it so delicately, and has this fairy-tale quality to it and it might have been one of my favorites in the whole story.

And then I loved how you had gutsy Lavender responding an how she was a Gryffindor, really. There is plenty of time to lie dead but only so much to live. ♥ ♥

And that last line - perfect! ack. I seem to be a tad incoherent in this. Your fault. :P But I really did love this completely - beautiful and thought-provoking and guh. lovely work ♥

(p.s. the banner is equally stunning!)

Author's Response: Ahhh ♥ to be completely honest I chose Lavender because she was blond, but I think that's worked out for the best~ And certainly Lavender was on the sillier end of the Hogwarts girls, but indeed, I should hope she grew up too! ;D

Everyone's been pointing that section out! It's the first part I wrote and everything grew out from there. I was like, okay, Lavlav hasn't got the best luck with Cormac ditching her, but she's cutting her hair which means she's moving on (and she had to cut her hair because her hair was cut in the banner; this is how I get my muse :P). Then the rest is history~

It was odd actually, because I didn't have to think very much to figure out what made Lavender special. All of a sudden, she just seemed like this really determined girl, even though most of the time it manifests as foolishness.

♥ :3 my heart swellls

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