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Review:Owlpost68 says:
Hi, I'm here from the review swap :)
I thought this was really good, there was only one part that didn't need a '?' it was when they were discussing their parents, when james said 'aren't you?' A period should be fine.

Annyway, on to the good stuff. This was really great showing the emotion they have as parents, and the love they have for each other. It's of course hard to read how happy they are when it's right before everything happened :( That really emphasized the drama of it. You've definitely gotten me remembering my story I want to do. Whenever I read this era nowadays I'm like, I really need to write this, but I'm also writing a WIP and want to start another, my first non canon, so I really don't know when I'll be able to do the one for this era.
lol see what you did, you got me musing at 10pm :P lolol
but that's a great thing too lol.
Very sweet, very real and sad too.
Great job!!

Author's Response: Yay for review swaps!
Thank you! Ah, well I'll edit that when I get a chance. Thanks for pointing that out.

Thank you! it wasn't originally planned to be a Halloween fic but it kind of turned out that way :( Well, let me know when your next Marauder story is up- I'd love to read it :D

Haha, thank you!
Jas


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