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Review:javct says:
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AH! I love reading about Quidditch- it's one of those things that I don't go out of my way to read but when I do read it I really enjoy it.

The characterisation (is still) brilliant! Victoire was written really good and I love the family dynamic between all of them; it was such an original way to write them :) Molly's crush is intriguing me. I want to know who he is! IS HE FROM THE BOOK THAT SHE IS ABOUT TO READ? OR MENTIONED IN IT? (Sorry, random speculations about what happens next haha).

Once again, the pace is good. You wrote the Quidditch really well (A lot of Quidditch stories are too fast paced and i'm like "whaa?")

That last line! What a cliffhanger! I think I'm just going to go ahead and read the next chapter without you even asking haha.

Jas

Author's Response: Haha, that's good because I quite enjoy writing it. It's pretty fun - even if you do have to find surnames for fourteen people, plus a commentator, etc.

I've got to admit, I was most worried about Victoire because she was the one I was least sure about in my head, but she seems to have come across alright. Haha, the crush unfortunatly isn't from the book or mentioned in it, but I'm glad you're intrigued... and I shall say no more! :P

Quidditch is fun to write! It was hard to get the pacing in terms of the Snitch and abilities - you know, not to make Louis seem too good - but, hm... I enjoyed it!

I love cliffhangers! I hate reading them, but I love using them!

I'm so glad you enjoyed it - and thank you so so much for the really lovely reviews!
Aph xx


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