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Review:javct says:
Back again!

I love this story! It's so original! I adore the imagery and description you are using in this story. I think this chapter has to be the best so far.

The characterisation has been consistent throughout the past three chapters which is really good :) I still love how you've written Molly as a normal teenage girl (in a lot of fan fictions they have dramatic storylines, hide behind an attitude etc. etc.) and I like Dominique as well. There is a bit of debate whether she is a girl or a boy but to me she'll always be a girl :)

Ooo! Molly has a crush; can't wait to see where this goes :) Honestly, I can't find anything wrong with this story: the pace is well set out and you've written in 2nd person so beautifully :)

*Jumps to the next chapter eagerly*
Jas

Author's Response: I'm kinda obsessed with imagery and description, lol, so I'm glad you like it! Really? Honestly, I can barely remember what happens in this chapter... thanks!

Dominique is always a girl to me too! I tried to make them both as normal as possible, while still being somewhat removed from the 'normal' of their family, if that makes sense. Like Dom's a Slytherin and Molly's book-obsessed. I'm glad you like the characterisation, though - I have so much fun writing them!

Haha, yeah, she does. Or does she? lol.

Thank you so much for this review! (and particularly all the compliments!


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