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Review:javct says:
javct45 here with your review! (again)

I had to have a quick read through the first chapter again (because I had almost forgotten what it was about) and have to say that I had almost forgotten just how much I loved your story! I adored this! It's such a unique storyline and it's written so well in second-person (which is a POV that is rare to find, and even rarer to find written well- which was what you have done)

I loved your characterisation. Next-Gen characters are pretty much OCs because we know so little about them but I love the wat you have written Molly. She's a girl; just a normal average girl (which is something you don't see very often in stories). Her fascination with Pride & Prejudice is amazing (Also, I might add, Pride & Prejudice is my favourite book)

I like the pace. It's not going too fast or too slow. I hope we learn the name of the seventh year Molly was talking too. Great chapter and onto the next one :D
Jas

Author's Response: It's good to see you back! :D

*blushes* Thanks so much! I'm still enjoying writing this (which is so rare for me) so everything seems to be going well - and the pov is actually getting to be quite fun :P

It really irks me when most OCs or characters have hugely complicated family lives/pasts/etc. so I really wanted to void that whole idea. Also, there's plenty of drama anyway :P I love that book too! And the films... ah, so good.

Ooh, the seventh year... I know his name! *smirks* You don't actually find out for a while, unfortunately, but he will turn up again, don't worry!

Thanks for the lovely, lovely review!
Aph xx


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