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Review:AC_rules says:
So you pretty much broke my face.

I know that makes no sense, but oh Naida, here I was thinking I'd take a cheery trip in your direction whilst pretending to revise and then you hit me with this great big pile of SAD (awesomely done, btw, the bit that Lily 'wrote' gave me goose pimples) and then I'm here like NO NOOOTTT FREEED and, well, you didn't give me due warning.

And also, it was in first person and I wasn't expecting it. You're good at it though, really you are. Have you written it before? I'm trying to remember... I know you mostly write third person but Im still a little unsure about this.

So we didn't meet him.

But I love Lily and Hattie and Lily's /plan/. You're making me want to start a school newspaper. The closest I ever got was writing this thing and sticking it to the vending machine anonymously, although it was a big hit.


AHaoijdoajdoiajfojijoas. So, this was great and the fact that this chapter has zero reviews (or at least, it did when i started reading) is nothing sure of a crime. HPffers should be ARRESTED. well, no, that's a lie.

They should all be hugged.

Have a hug, Naida.

And a review.

(and this seems like an eloquent place to end).

AC

Author's Response: Hi there lovely! ♥

I'm very sorry. I just can't seem to get the hang of this whole humor thing. This chapter was more like-TO HELL WITH HUMOR. LILY NEEDS TO SHOW OFF. But yeaahhh, I'll try and be happier next time. Except there's still a lot of sadness. UGH I HAVE YOUR PROBLEM. I CANT HAVE MY CHARACTERS BE HAPPY. But I'm insanely glad you liked Lily's part. She'd be very happy.

The first person was a stupid spur of the moment thing on my part. Lily was just talking to me and it was working and I could hear her thoughts and it just felt right to be inside her head! I have written it before, but you're right, I prefer third person. But this is a story of new and exciting things! (aka, Naida failing at trying to step out of her comfort zone)

And no. We don't meet him :( There was also a serious lack of Ben in this chapter (I really need to get over him because he's not a major character in this!) which makes me sad. I love Ben. For many reasons. I'm already planning a Ben sequel novella thing. OKAY SHUT UP AND STAY ON TOPIC, NAIDA.

Ohh, I knew the school newspaper thing from the start :D I was part of one when I was, what, 10? Something like that. It was a long time ago. And the articles were all weird stuff like "10 people like apples and fifteen like bananas!" Lily's will be much better. And I'm totally stealing that vending machine idea. Except there are no vending machines in Hogwarts. Ermmm...I'll find a subsitiute.

WELL, I think it got lost in the mass updating chapters bonanza spree thing, since I updated this when the queue was 0 hours. So I'm not too fussed :P They should all be hugged.

(Though the fact that Lily was nominated for SOTM just makes everything perfect. I love Ravenclaws. They make my heart happy and my ego go through the wall. Seriously, QTR comments are just one massive LOVE FEST)

But again, getting off topic. I really suck at answering reviews.

But have a hug yourself. Or two.

-Naida


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