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Review:Moonyxluna says:
I just have to take a second to cheer for the beginning mention of History of Magic-- THANK YOU! Finally! A character who doesn't loathe the class! Every time HoM gets mentioned in fics it's always just a joke because it's supposed to be boring, but I would have to think it couldn't be that bad. And to LEARN from it-- exactly what you should do with history!! fantastic, thank you :D

anyway, praise aside-- this was wonderful! I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. With every sentance I was just drawn more into his little adventure, leading up to the end! I'm always "that" reviewer that goes "So wait what happened!?" even if the point was to 'leave it up to the reader'-- but I will refrain from asking :D

I liked how you wrote the mannerisms of the death eaters; they all seemed to fit well with what we know about the characters personallities. I loved the description you used of Bellatrix's voice-- worse than nails on a chalkboard :)

very fantastic one-shot! Your writing is amazing!! This isn't normally the story I'd go for off an authors page, but I'm so glad you asked me to review it because I enjoyed it a lot!

Author's Response: Ah! Thank you. It really was a step out side of the box for me too, as generally my writing never works with mystery. Romance, humour, drama, even dark and angsty if you get me in the right mood (I won an award for a one-shot about a schizophrenic woman that lived alone by the edge of a cliff and committed suicide... Yeah, charming tale) but mystery never works.

I'm so glad that you liked this, as it really means a lot to me to hear it. Haha, to be honest? I don't even know. The story came to me as I wrote it, no planning at all, and as that's where I ended it, I don't actually know what happened as it didn't develop that far in my head. I can see something along the lines of them petrifying him and leaving him there in a muggle basement to die, or so many other variables, but honestly, I don't even know. If you can think of something, let me know, yeah? :P

Thanks again for the comments on description. I'm always looking to improve on that, so hearing that you liked 'worse than nails on a blackboard' is great :)

I'm so glad that you liked this, and thanks again for running such a great challenge. And hopefully this has opened your mind to new stories, etc. (Maybe :P)

Thank you!
- Adele :)

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