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Review:RosieQueen says:
This is Rosie from the Blue vs. Bronze review battle! :)

Oh, this was so wonderfully written! I couldn't catch any spelling/grammar/punctuation mistakes, which you should be very proud of, since I tend to pick out lots of mistakes in every story I read! :) I find it really strange to read stories about the Black sisters, with Bellatrix becoming so evil, it's hard for me to imagine her as a little girl. Which is why I think you portrayed Bellatrix so perfectly! She's a hard character to pull off, especially as a little girl. You have to tone her down just right to make sure she's not as insane as her adult version, and not too kind for a future Death Eater. Narcissa was exactly as I imagined her as little girl. She's sort of the in-between sister who's evil but not quite. (I'm not sure I'm making sense anymore, sorry about that.) And Andromeda, she's obviously the sweet, dreamer-type girl. I love the way you wrote her character, it's so original and well thought-out. All in all, I really enjoyed this. I'm going to keep reading. 10/10!


Author's Response: Hey there! I found it really weird starting to write it because it's Bellatrix, you know, as a child! It was so weird to think about, lol. I'm so glad you liked how I characterised them - it's really hard to do because there are just so many different interpretations of them and I find children so hard to write. I wanted to make the differences between the sisters obvious, but not enough so that they could still be close but also have them showing qualities of what they were going to turn into, if that made sense :D And, seriously, you summed them all up pretty well! :P

Ah, thank you so much for the compliments! (Particularly about the grammar/punctuation thing - I'm really bad at that, tbh, so that made me very happy!)
Aph xx

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