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Review:lilypotterfan123 says:
Wow my terrible idea has been transformed into an amazing start! It is a very promising beginning as you can tell Hermione is already so uncertain of her future regarding Ron's hasty proposal. It seems rushed and maybe if Ron had taken the time to do it properly then maybe a different reaction or at least a more thought out one would have occured. Though it is good that you haven't made Ron out to be the bad guy or anything like that, he's just confused like Hermione is and in that respect I think you captured their characterisation spot on. I think the survivor tattoo was a nice touch, it reminded us what they've done and how it can change they're lives.

I can't wait to see what you've done next and I'll be reviewing the next chapter soon. BTW let me know how future chapters are going and if you need any help PM me or whatever :)

Bex (10/10 btw!)

Author's Response: Hey Becca
This was your idea so I'm glad you like it a lot and that it's a promising beginning. I know you already know what the plot is so I'm glad you still noticed a lot of this!

I really don't want Ron to be the bad guy, he's not bad really, hes just a little bit naieve as to her reactions and what she wants. The tattoo 'survivor' has recieved a lot of critisism but I really like it!

I'm glad you want to review further chapters!

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