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Review:CambAngst says:
Tagging you from the Review the Person Above You thread in the common room.

I loved the saucy little details of Lily's love life, although the exotic element was tempered considerably by the generally disgusting condition of the rest of her apartment. The folder was obviously the real plot piece in this chapter, and its contents were very interesting. So it sounds like several members of the clan are known to have dealings with the Fraternity. You keep making this more and more complex. If I'm remembering correctly, Lorcan, Scorpius, Dom and Roxy are all now suspected of being the traitor. You have quite a perplexing little mystery going on here.

I really enjoyed Ron and Harry's appearance in the chapter. You did a great job writing them, even in this limited appearance. Their concern seemed genuine and their reasoning process very believable. It added another twist to the plot, inasmuch as it seems that whoever is stalking the clan is more interested in seeing their criminal activities disrupted -- whether by sending them to jail or putting them in St. Mungo's or alerting the older generation to their activities -- than actually killing or injuring any of them. It kind of casts the whole conspiracy in a different light, and makes me wonder who the real target is.

What have you done to Teddy and Vic? I will have to try to find out soon!

Author's Response: I'm sure Lily's love life is fairly saucy, yes! And she really should hire a cleaner, I know.

The folder! Aha! I know! The Fraternity and the Clan are unknowingly intertwined- or knowingly...

Lorcan, Scorpius, Dom, James, Roxy, Lily, Albus, Freddy and Lysander, if you're counting everything suspicious that they do :P I'm working my way through them all, implicating.

I'm glad you liked my Ron and Harry- they are so hard to write! You do them so well, so I'm glad you liked mine :D

I've given a few hints as to why they're being targeted, but I think I'll leave it open for now :)

Teddy and Vic.. I'm sorry! :(

Thanks for the review!

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