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Review:Indigo Seas says:
I simply cannot understand how you are this talented, this often. I mean, honestly, I am overwhelmingly jealous and have a profuse amount of praise for this.

Firstly, just because I read it last, the last line was... wow. I always try to end with something like that, personally, so I know what an incredible challenge it is to pack so much punch into a line or two. But goodness, Rachel, you completely and utterly did it. The meaning is there, sure, but it also holds the power of style and finesse, which I love. The words are just so... I dunno. They go together so well, if you can sort of / kind of understand what I'm trying to say here.

And I loved all your little interrupters here and there. Your flow is masterful, really. Each paragraph just melts into the next, and I think I've said that before to you but it doesn't matter. Here, with your one or two word interrupters, the paragraphs don't just dissolve. Each of them sticks, which wouldn't be possible if you didn't know how to play with your words so gosh darn well.

Before this gets super gushy (too late?), I'll just end it here. I really have nothing to complain about. You are brilliant with this craft, dear. I'm always extremely pleased whenever I get a chance to read something by you, and this was just... beautiful. It was beautiful.

Talented, talented. :)

- Rin
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Author's Response: The feeling's very much mutual ♥

I really like the alliteration of the last line. I knew it was Dominique from the start but I didn't really know she was dead until I got there and it just happened. I think it hits quite hard. I completely get what you're trying to say!

I think the separators were necessary, if only because it would probably be confusing for everyone except me when reading it. I'm so glad they don't ruin the flow, though. I didn't even consider that they would but it's nice to have confirmation :P

Thank you so much, lovely, for such a wonderful review.

♥
xx

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