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Review:charlottetrips says:
Good set up chapter. I enjoyed being introduced to the Wellington brothers. Most often in stories, Squibs are represented as these unlucky folk, the lower class but here, Archibald's got smarts and he's toed that line between Muggle and Magic enough to be useful to his wizard folk.

Interesting also that you introduce some doubt in Anastasia's mind as to the mission that she is to carry out. You've also made her an artist which to me means a free-thinker and someone who isn't always going to conform to rules so there's a chance of rebellion in her, though I'm not sure that that's where this is leading in her case.

Your attention to detail with the history and the surroundings and characters is wonderful. It really is like reading one of those war drama books except with a Harry Potter twist.

Char

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Squibs always seem to be the downtrodden of the wizarding world, so I wanted to write one that's still a cunning and ambitous slytherin and see how far he could go.

Intersting observations about Anastasia, and that's all I can really say right now.

I tried to get the historical details accurate, so I'm glad to hear that came across.

Thanks again!

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