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Review:Rocky says:
Cute story, but I agree with the one who said it was too fast moving. I think if you didn't rush it and took yourself a little better time to explore the characters and the plot generally, it could be really interesting. You should never be in a rush when telling a story, it never turns out for the better ;) You could easily have written 10-15 chapters more with a little effort, and your story would definitely not suffer from it.

I didn't like that you borrowed so much from the Titanic movie in the James/Mia storyline either, the idea is good and to come up with original plotlines shouldn't be that hard.

But keep writing, though, you show promise in many of your stories, including this one :)

Author's Response: Thank you for your constructive critisism. If you check the dates, you'll see that I actually wrote this quite awhile ago. I've considered rewriting this story, but just haven't felt up to it. My other work has improved greatly, if I do say so myself.

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