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Review:Timechild says:
Interesting Chapter.

I like how you presented the material. It flowed nicely. The "foolish boy, foolish girl" motif was nicely done as well.

Overall, good job

Author's Response: Thank you for the review :) I wanted to open with a prologue that set up the story and could give the reader some ideas on what is to come, without giving too much away. The next chapter is in validation, and thank you again for reviewing :)

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