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Review:headoverharry73 says:
So cute!!! I loved reading this! I agree with the other reviewers who expressed interest in seeing more goings-on with Amatis and Cariad in future stories. There might not be enough mishaps to write about for all the other couples in individual one-shots, but maybe you can do a one-shot on all the others combined. Poor Ron & Hermione having enough to warrant their own story! :-)

I loved how you put little hints throughout the story about what was going on in each scene. I had to really think back about those seven bottles of potion in the 1st year, especially since this was never mentioned in the movie, which I've seen more often than the number of times I read the book I'm afraid to admit. But it brought back good memories of all the little secrets the books contained that only us "readers" would know about. :-) Putting Luna into the story and having her interact with the cupids was spot on as well. I could tell you were talking about her after the first couple of sentences. I also think that's fine that she was outside the room as the DA meeting wrapped up - nothing wrong with that.

I loved how they finally got into the Room of Requirement too. Like so many before them, they really didn't know how to get in, they just paced back & forth wishing and pleading for it, and that was the trick!

Well done! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful works!

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