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Review:HappyMollyWeasley says:
This is a sweet story! I like fluff very much! :-) You did a great job with Ron's and Hermione's characters. They are just the way they should be! Ron is very cute both at Christmas with his surprises for Hermione, and as a father-to-be.

You have written a quite believable description of their childbirth too. The only thing that bothers me (and that bothers me a lot, really!) is that Ron leaves Hermione twice: to send that patronus, and to check on the family. I think that's unlikely to happen. There's really not any need for them to sit in the waiting room (for hours?). I don't know anybody in real life who has their family waiting in the hospital while giving birth...

Your explanation of the name "Rose" is both sweet and unusual.

All in all I think that you did a good job with this fic, and I liked reading it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I am horrible because I took such a long extended break from the archives and never responded back to your great review. I apologize!

I am really glad that you enjoyed the story minus the spot where Ron left. I will have to rethink that part and see what I can do to change it up a bit. It is sometimes hard to bring the magical world and the real world together.

Thank you again for reading and reviewing I greatly appreciate it!!


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