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Review:Elenia says:
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I have millions of things I should be doing right now, but I just couldn't resist. I'm addicted to your story, no doubt about that!

Amazing chapter once again, it's really wonderful how you manage to keep everything so interesting and captivating. Even the little things. Everything just fits in its place and there haven't been one single scene in this whole story that I haven't liked. It's just brilliant.

I'm amazed by the amount of thought you've put into your plot! There just seems to be so much in this story. I'm trying to memorize every little detail as I read on, trying hard not to miss anything that could be important later on.

"Don't make me pull rank on you. Or worse still, tell your mum." - loved that line to bits!

I'm really excited to find out what more you have in store! Especially with this villainess of yours! She seems really interesting and I can't wait to find out more about her! Why do I have a feeling she's somebody we know?

Excellent work! You're such a talented writer and this story is so amazing. It deserves all the credit it has already received and so, so much more!

I'll drop by soon again to read the next one, probably later today (:

~E

Author's Response: Awww, you're making me blush here!

I'm really glad that things are flowing well for you. That has always been one of my biggest concerns in writing this. My writing style basically involves forcing myself to get as much down in print as I can and then going back to edit it down to only the good stuff. I always worry that I've either left too much in and the chapter is going to drag or that I've cut too much out and it won't make sense. Good to know that I hit a good balance with this one.

I mapped the rough outline of the plot out before I really started writing, but as you can imagine, some of the particulars have evolved a bit. The final resolution is still pretty much the same, but the path to get there has changed.

If you like Lady Tenabra, I'm pleased to say that she is a fixture of the story and you'll be hearing much more from her.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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