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Review:CassiePotter says:
This chapter was AMAZING! I love how even Aradelle is trained to hate purebloods. It makes you wonder what sort if people the Greengrasses are... If even their house-elf has their beliefs engrained that deeply in her.
I loved this chapter so much! Zabini is one of my favorite characters, and the way you write him is genius. We're just starting to scratch the surface with him, but you have me intrigued by his character. And he has the best lines! Their funny yet I get shivers, and I can most definitely picture his smirk. I ADORE the way he gets under Astoria's skin, and how you write her reactions to that. I can't wait for another chapter! 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Hello!

Yes, Aradelle had most likely been with the Greengrass family for years so its most likely that she would adopt their views. I thought of how Kreacher was with Hermione in Order of the Phoenix to get that part of the story right.
I think I've got quite a few Zabini fans out there, the chapter bumped up quite a bit since I first put it up and you guys are just amazing! He's actually a very hard character to write for, like Benjamin in "Growth", he always takes me in these crazy directions and I'm never certain if I've done him justice.
Zabini is sort of hot in my mind, that smirk makes me giggle, hehehe. He picks on Astoria on purpose because he thinks she's funny but he doesn't know what sort of creature she is, really, her family is known for its temper. He might want to be careful, but then again, he'd probably just laugh at her. Astoria's reaction to him will continue to change but I'm not sure where to go with this just yet but once I get over this annoying block, I'll post a fresh chapter up! Meanwhile, "This is Angelina" is finished and you should check out that Epilogue and "Growth" has another chapter and I know you were wanting some more of that Benjamin Malfoy, hahaha. Oh! And I have another "This is..." you should let me know your thoughts on it when you can.
Thanks so much for the review, I totally missed you!
Much love,

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