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Review:Ravenclaw_Charm says:
I absolutely love this! There are no problems with flow, pacing, plausibility, or any of that. It's fantastic, really. You made me shed a few tears :') The way it starts off is great, a rush, and you characterize James and Sirius well from the get-go. Then you describe the Potter family and their love for each other, which I really liked :) I also loved how Sirius was making fun of Dumbledore as they ran, which is totally a Sirius thing to do. I laughed picturing Dumbledore getting his beard caught in a tree - why hadn't I ever thought about that before?! Hahaha.
The star thing was what brought me to the tears. It was just so cute... James/Lily is my favorite ship of all time haha. Their love has no bounds; it can reach across a continent. Very romantic!
Something I found off was that at first, Sirius and James are pursued by Death Eaters, then, later, they say dragons were chasing them. Unless it was both, I'm a bit confused.
Other than that, a fantastic fic. It's in my favorites now :D Thank you for your request! I really enjoyed reading this!

Author's Response: No, they were running away from a Dragon Sanctuary where Death Eaters had taken over. Sorry if that wasn't clear...

But i'm so glad you liked it, and i'm thrilled that you enjoyed it enough to favourite it ^_^

Thanks so much for the review, and i'll certainly re-request with some more of my Lily/James fics. (OTP FOREVER!)

- Adele :D

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