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Review:Deltaris says:
I like the break in action here. You use the meeting as a tool to tell the read just how bad the war has gotten.

Muriel! I can completely see that coming back to haunt them. Especially after Bill's comment that she's very influential.

I agree with your author's note, this seemed like the best place to stop. The length of the chapter is fine, given the information and (possible) foreshadowing that we're given from the meeting.

I think that your characters are believable and true, so far. The back and forth with the Weasleys seems like something that would happen. I love Ginny here :)

Del<3

Author's Response: I haven't decided what'll happen to Muriel yet but I can say that she will come back. I'm thinking as a spy for the Death Eaters maybe...

I'm glad you agree!

That's a good thing that you think the characters are believable and true! I worry that Hermione gets a little OOC later though...

Thanks for reviewing!

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