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Review:Deltaris says:
Great chapter. The flow of the action was smooth and easy to follow. I admire Andromeda here, she's so brave. The fact that she recognizes that Ana will aid the war more than herself, and fights until the end, is extremely touching.

The tension within the room is almost palpable to the reader, you did a fantastic job portraying the mood of the war. I like that you used George as a bit of comic relief, it really helped ease that tension and was like a little glimmer of hope.

I love that you implemented the voting system the way that you did. Being a sorority girl, I see this happen every week at meeting. We never saw much of it in canon, and I think that it's essential to decision making. Although, I do think it would be acceptable and necessary to throw it out eventually, when the war gets tougher, the harder decisions need to be made and put into action immediately.

The ending gave us a glimpse into Ana, which I think is great. She's not just a fighter, she's a human being, and you show that simply and beautifully.

Del<3

Author's Response: I do like Andromeda... I wish I hadn't killed her off... Who knows though? Maybe it wasn't a killing curse and they captured her!

Yo're right. She is a human. Even BA'S in awesome epic actiony movies show a bit of a human side.

Thanks for reviewing!

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