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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
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This was a really great one shot :) I'm always super impressed at the stories written in 500 words. Some of my favorite one shots are for the Every Word Counts challenge because they manage to portray a lot of emotion in a small amount of writing, and this is no exception. Sirius's emotions come through really well. It's completely believeable, and I really like when he made the vow. Your description of that was flawless.

The last little bit with the lilies was gorgeous as well. I could picture that perfectly-Sirius at the grave with the singly lily on each of them. And the last line was so Sirius! That tied the entire story together.

Lovely job :)

-Naida

Author's Response: Thank you! I've always been impressed with people who have managed to write something in 500 words, so I thought i'd give it a (second) go. So are mine! Thank you, it was my first attempt at writing anything Marauder-like so I'm glad you thought I did it good :)

Thank you!
Jas


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