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Review:Jen827 says:
Grinning, cheering and clapping all at once! There was just the right amount of fluff in this chapter! I just hope that Regulus doesn't become too much of a softy. One of the traits that makes him so appealing is the forbidden quality of having a relationship with him. Regulus' declaration before he asks Katherine to be his girlfriend sounded more like what a girl wants to hear than what a guy would actually say; a tad staged, though undoubtedly very sweet. I don't think guys are as vocal about their feelings; It takes time for them to open up and admit to how they feel. Regulus either has a strong sense of self and feels comfortable freely expressing his emotions, or he is more sensitive than the average male.

I enjoyed Lily in this chapter; "sweet, but very strange," accurately describes her behavior. Also, I wonder if Remus feels anything more than friendship towards Katherine? Not that it's impossible to be close friends with a member of the opposite sex, but since the best relationships share many of the same values as close friendships, it's easy to fall for a friend when you respect and trust them. Although attraction also plays a part of course!

I hope I don't sound too critical in my review! Regulus is one of my favorite characters to read about, so I suppose I have a preconceived image of how he should be. I'm guessing that since you chose to write a story with Regulus as a feature character, you share some of my Regulus obsession haha! (Was there something specific that made you want to write this story?) Overall, another wonderful chapter. 10/10

Author's Response: I definitely share your Regulus obsession. I understand what you mean about the scene where they get together. I also have an image in my head for Regulus and I just felt like that was something he would do. I'm so glad you like this chapter though, and I appreciate you taking the time to review! Next chapter should be up soon!

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