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Review:Pixileanin says:
I am starting to get intrigued by your villainess. She seems quite cunning. This is good. I also like how you have constructed Flint's attitude here. He wants the rewards but he's impatient. That's usually a recipe for trouble. :)

I like how Harry used all resources available to get the identity of the curse. That it was Black's portrait made it a really cool development. It is interesting that Ginny's absence wasn't noticeable to me until Harry thought about her later that evening. It's really good writing there, because I felt a pang right along with him.

I really enjoyed reading the scene where Flint tries to recruit the men in the bar. You put him in what looked like his element and then hit him with a few grisly characters that were so out of his league and made him deal with it. So very entertaining.

It was very touching that the Healer went to Harry to gauge Ron and Hermione's reaction to the possibility that she might not fully recover. I liked that you brought us back around to the sensitive and caring characters. There is such a contrast between the light and dark here.

Author's Response: Hello, again.

Lady Tenabra is very cunning, in addition to being brilliant and utterly ruthless. Much more about her story to come...

Harry will be troubled by his grief over Ginny throughout the story. I try not to dwell on it because this isn't meant to be a teen-angsty type of story, but it does have a major effect on some of the key decisions that Harry makes.

Flint is way out of his league in the bar. He's really not much of a revolutionary and he's far too highbrow for the job. But he's going to try to do what he must because the alternative is to go back to prison.

Hmmnnn... "Touching" wasn't exactly the reaction I was going for, but maybe things will become clearer a few chapters from now. The healer is basically unloading his problem on Harry because he doesn't know what to do. It isn't very professional of him. But I agree about the contrast between light and dark.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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