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Review:Moonyxluna says:
So, this is my 300th review given, and I'm so happy it got to be on such a captivating piece of writing.

The way you write Sirius is amazing. I feel right there with his character in everything he does. I love the way you write him with Cora, he's so sweet how he's a bit intimidated by her. I think that's exactly the kind of girl Sirius needs :)

The scene in the club was fantastic, I just want to high five Cora for that kick! ;P Their moments in the bedroom were so beautifully written; all the love was there and it really showed through your writing. Brilliant work!

Awh, and the stuff about him being a father! I'm so mad at Bellatrix Lestrange right now! He could have been so happy! heart wrenching stuff, dear.

okay, so I know I say this every time, but ohmygod the way you include canon details! I actually pulled out my copy of goblet of fire to read the bit about Harry's fourteenth birthday, because I swore I remembered the bit about Sirius sending a tropical bird!

I really loved this chapter. Brilliant work! I noticed the pang of bittersweet at the end with his realization that people there could still know him (the guy from school with him). I don't want there to only be one chapter left! Fantastic job!

Author's Response: I'm sorry, I didn't realize this didn't get responded to :(
Thank you so much for giving me your 300th review! It means a lot.
I'm so happy you like how I did his character and Cora, I didn't think he'd really fall for anything less than her. I LOVE the club scene :D It was really fun to write.
I'm glad you liked the bedroom scene. I can see now why people say it can be hard to write, but I think it paid off :)
yes What Means Most really connects with this story in a big way, I'm glad you read that and this now. lol I know! I had to do something with that, where he was when he sent it.
Glad you loved it hun, it means a lot :)

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